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Monday, September 16, 2019

descriptive language

Once upon a time there were two Beautiful zombies in the damp gloomy Forest.
They found this abandoned house and when they walked in all they found was dark shivering feelings
There were These yucky little bugs everywhere
  And a Crow like a Lion's belly. That hasn't eaten in 6 years.
And went in an elevator 
The elevator had Spider webs everywhere.
And when they Went up to floor number 4 There were this Enormous 
 scary looking old man
His hair was white and he had Scars all Over  the man's face. The power was out. And the old man said
I would run if I was you.
The enormous man come running after the zombies
The zombies 
found a big rusty old axe and axe the man's head off. The enormous man was killed instantly.
The zombies went up another floor to floor 5
  then the zombies found 
Lots and lots of scary-looking children's
And the children said repeatedly
   we have been kidnapped
And they were walking towards the zombies
The zombies were really scared that was starting to sweat. that was so 
scared they ran back into
 the elevator and close the doors as fast as they can. The children were trying to get into the
 elevator the zombies
 went down to the bottom floor
 and ran out they were screaming so
 loud the children got inside of the elevator and went down to the 
bottom floor as well
  and we're running after the zombies.
 the zombies ran then they found a Big Pond and went into the pond and they waited
 till the children ran past and then they ran even further.. The 2 zombies went into the dark gloomy Forest then they went to bed till the next day 
The next day does zombies when exploring in the forest it was raining
 the zombies were walking across
A wet path 
And the zombies nice little beach with no one on it
 they sit down for a while
 then they got too hot and they died the end 


this is my descriptive language story



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